On the Come Up

On the Come UpSixteen-year-old Bri wants to be one of the greatest rappers of all time. Or at least make it out of her neighbourhood one day. As the daughter of an underground rap legend who died before he hit big, Bri’s got big shoes to fill. But now that her mom has unexpectedly lost her job, food banks and shutoff notices are as much a part of Bri’s life as beats and rhymes. With bills piling up and homelessness staring her family down, Bri no longer just wants to make it—she has to make it.

On the Come Up is Angie Thomas’s homage to hip-hop, the art that sparked her passion for storytelling and continues to inspire her to this day. It is the story of fighting for your dreams, even as the odds are stacked against you; of the struggle to become who you are and not who everyone expects you to be; and of the desperate realities of poor and working-class black families.

On the Come Up by Angie Thomas was published by Walker on February 7th 2019.

Trigger warnings; racism, drug dealing, gun violence, police violence.

The Hate U Give was the book everyone was talking about, and it was an incredible story so it was all too easy to see where the hype was coming from and how well deserved it was. It also meant there were high expectations for Angie Thomas’s second novel, but in my opinion she more than delivered with On the Come Up.

“You’ll never silence me and you’ll never kill my dream,
Just recognize when you say brilliant that you’re also saying Bri.”

On the Come Up Aesthetic

Bri’s dream is to be one of the greatest rappers of all time. She’s got rap in her blood thanks to her dad, who was a rap legend before he was gunned down, and the talent to back it up. When Bri wins her first underground rap battle, her introduction to that world, she has people’s attention but if she wants to keep it she needs to follow it up with a song everyone will remember. This is where Supreme, her dad’s old manager, swoops in.

But while Bri’s music dreams are soaring her mother loses her job, and they start struggling to pay the bills and still afford to eat. Making it as one of the rapping greats becomes even more important so Bri can help her family, but her song has made her out to be someone she’s not; a gangster with blood on her hands and a violent temper. Supreme wants to maintain that image but it’s not long before Bri’s music starts a movement and Bri can see how her words have been taken the wrong way to potentially disastrous consequences.

“Aunt Pooh said I only get one chance to let everybody and their momma know who I am.
So I take it.”

The blurb describes On the Come Up as ‘Angie Thomas’s homage to hip-hop, the art that sparked her passion for storytelling’ and it was easy to see that passion in her writing. Bri lives for rap and that really shines through in this book. It took me a while to really connect with Bri’s character; she’s outspoken, unapologetic, and abrasive, but she’s also loyal to her family, passionate, and in some ways scared and insecure. She’s someone who uses her abrasiveness to cover up for everything she’s unsure about, and in this book there’s a lot for her to be unsure about.

While On the Come Up doesn’t have the same message The Hate U Give does it still shows the struggle Bri lives with being black, being from the Garden, and being poor. The community is still reeling from what happened to Khalil and when Bri faces her own injustice at the hands of the security team who man the entrance to her school it sparks a movement, with Bri’s music fanning the flames.

“Jay really did leave me and Trey at our grandparents’ house. She couldn’t take care of us and her drug habit, too. That’s when I learned that when people die, they sometimes take the living with them.”

There was a very strong family dynamic in On the Come Up. Bri lives with her mother but years ago when Jay succumbed to drugs after Bri’s father’s death and abandoned her children at their grandparents it changed the way Bri saw her forever. Both Jay and Bri’s brother have tried to do things right, to stay away from the unsavoury parts of the Garden, but it seems like life is still determined to keep them down.

Bri’s extended family also play a large part in Bri’s story. Her Aunt Pooh is Bri’s manager at the very beginning but she doesn’t know how to be a manager. She’s involved with one of the gangs and deals drugs so she’s all too aware of how the messages in Bri’s song will be interpreted and she tries to warn Bri. Bri’s paternal grandparents are very involved in her life, and Bri finds herself torn between her mother and her grandmother, who struggles to see past Jay’s path and how she’s pulled herself up from rock bottom for her children.

“There’s only so much you can take being described as somebody you’re not.”

There was a romantic subplot, which I enjoyed because it didn’t steal the focus from Bri’s character development, her journey or her struggles, and I loved the dynamic between Bri and her two friends; Sonny and Malik. The three of them have been friends since they were children, they’ve stayed close but now their dynamic seems to be changing and Bri struggles to maintain her footing around them, especially Malik.

It took me a little while to get into On the Come Up, and there were some parts of this story that were hard to read. Again with this book Angie Thomas has written a hard-hitting story with a main character whose voice really shines through. You can’t really compare On the Come Up to The Hate U Give, or vice versa, they’re both incredible stories with messages that will stay with me for a long time after reading.


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Have you read On the Come Up, or is it still on your TBR list?

Did you struggle to see past Bri’s tough outer personality, or was she a character you connected to instantly? Did you enjoy the rap aspects of this book? What did you think of the family dynamic in this book; the relationship Bri has with her mother verses the relationship she has with her aunt?

Have you read Angie Thomas’s other release, which is your favourite?


14 thoughts on “On the Come Up

  1. Hey Beth!
    I’ve been curious about this book ever since I’ve heard about it and since I’ve enjoyed The Hate U Give. It’s great to know that you liked On the Come Up. I should definitely read it soon 🙂

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  2. Great review Beth! I’m glad to see you enjoyed this! I agree this was different than the Hate U Give, but it was just as poignant as THUG and really talked about real issues that slide under the radar. I have to agree as well, I didn’t connect to Bri right away, but just her and being a teenager I could pull from that and I thought her crush was super cute and just added this sense of warmth to the story. Again, great review! 😀 ❤️

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    1. Thanks so much Meghan. 🙂 ❤ Exactly, you can't really compare the two books even though they're written by the same author because they're such different stories, but both of them are amazing and kind of a sign of how talented Angie Thomas is as a writer.
      Oh yes, I loved the small romance in this book, and I loved even more that it was just a side plot. it took nothing away from Bri's character which is how it should be in books! 😀
      Thanks again. 🙂 ❤

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  3. Lovely review, Beth! ❤ I'm so, so very happy you enjoyed this book just as much as The Hate U Give, more often than not when an author writes a stunning debut, it feels… hard, somehow, to follow up with a book just as strong, I'm so glad that it was the case here. I feel like Angie Thomas always nails great family vibes and dynamics in books, so happy this one has them too, I can't wait to read it 😀

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    1. Thanks so much Marie. 🙂 ❤ Yeah I had high expectations after THUG (who wouldn't right?) but this book was amazing in its own way. Angie Thomas is such a powerful writer, and yeah there is an incredible family dynamic in On the Come Up as well. I'm pretty much 100% sure that this is going to be a book you love! 😀


  4. I think the thing I really loved about On the Come Up was just how different Bri was from Starr. By setting the narrative in Garden Heights, Thomas demonstrates that Blackness contains multitudes — there is no one way to be Black and from a particular area. I also love how she unapologetically writes for young Black girls, not explaining aspects of Black culture for non-Black readers as I’ve seen done in other novels.

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    1. Actually I never thought about it that way but you’re right it was a great way to demonstrate that. When I was reading I was just thinking about how well Angie Thomas has developed both Starr and Bri so they both had such individual and strong voices. They were incredible characters and yes it took me a little while to connect with Bri but I loved her just as much as Starr by the end. 🙂

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